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Read Our Quickwrites

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Read Our Quickwrites

"Light is precious and it might as well be in stories.  I am a jailer and you are a tiny mouse whispering stories in my ear.  Tell me a story, tell more.  Bring light to us all.  We all could use some light.  Tell me the best story you can think of.  Light is precious, stories are precious.  I would like some brightness.  We need light.  Stories are like magic.  Stories remind me of bright flares or sunlight.  Stories are the drizzley goodness of our souls."  --Christopher

"A sun peeking out of a cloud.  A war going on.  A truce between each enemy.  Darkness being shattered by light.  Light conquering dark.  A monster getting beaten by you.  A war turning into peace.  A great shadow coming to an end.  A dinosaur becoming an animal.  A mouse facing darkness.  A small thing with a big quest.  A princess forgiving a rat.  A king with joy.  A great joy awakening.  Evil has stopped.  A friendship beginning.  A rescue at darkness.  A crown showing light.  A great day coming after a bad day."  --Aaron 

We LOVED this book!
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    What is a quickwrite?
 
"Quickwrite directions: When I finish reading, write as quickly as you can for three minutes without stopping.  Write whatever comes to mind, but do not stop.  Simply put your thoughts on paper.  There are no rules, just don't stop.  Go."

After completing our read-aloud, The Tale of Despereaux, I chose a short piece of writing from the book, read it aloud, and asked students to do a quickwrite in response to the book.  Quickwrites were developed by Linda Rief.  The purpose is to help students develop fluency and confidence in their writing.  In quickwrites students are asked to respond to a piece of writing.  The results of this simple exercise are astounding.  Consider the following examples, written by the students of Room 41:

QUICKWRITES:

"Kindness and forgiveness are stronger than hatred and fury."              --Tristan

"Stories are light and Despereaux is faith within the dark or light of Princess Pea (she has a story to retrieve).  No matter how broken she is, she puts herself back in place like you might have.  "Happily ever after" were her last words to say.  Every story has light.  Light is precious." --Trayna

"Why is her heart full of dark?  What happened to Peas's crown?  Is the crown on Mig's head still?  How old is Despereaux?  Why didn't Mig kill all the rats?  Why did the rats want to eat mice?  How old is the Pea and Mig?  How long was the rope that held the locket?  Why did the rats torture people?  Why did the jailer want a story?"  --Max

"A sun peeking out of a cloud.  A war going on.  A truce between each enemy.  Darkness being shattered by light.  Light conquering dark.  A monster getting beaten by you.  A war turning into peace.  A great shadow coming to an end.  A dinosaur becoming an animal.  A mouse facing darkness.  A small thing with a big quest.  A princess forgiving a rat.  A king with joy.  A great joy awakening.  Evil has stopped.  A friendship beginning.  A rescue at darkness.  A crown showing light.  A great day coming after a bad day."  --Aaron 
 
 
"Roscuro is a rat that wanted light.  Light is like a treasure and precious.  Some darkness is evil and harsh."  --Harry
 
 
"Love.  The dungeon.  A brave knight.  Sunlight.  Broken hearted, sweet soup.  Bright light.  The messed-up heart of the rat, Roscuro.  Hot, tasty soup.  Light that the rat wants.  Bottecelli not wanting to eat Despereaux.  A small needle on Despereaux's waist.  Red thread.  The dark, terrifying dungeon.  Knight in shining armour.  Happy cook; hot, outlawed soup.  The pain of Despereaux's stubbed tail.  Light is bright.  Dark is spiteful.  Light.  Stories are the precious space between us.  We all need light to open our hearts and souls; to be free and active."   --Blake 

"It made me think of how easy a heart could be broken.  It made me think of how rare forgiveness is and how special it can be.  It made me think about how special, unique and helpful friends could be.  It made me think of how one day someone that you think is your friend can take something so special and just take it away."   --Nick
 
"Gregory the jailer said, "...a story is light...", therefore, when Despereaux told Gregory a story, he was bringing light to all of the dungeon. So, Roscuro HAD light the whole time.  He did not need the princess for light.  All he had to do was tell a story, just like Gregory said.  Therefore, if Roscuro didn't chew the rope on Gregory's leg he would have someone to tell a story to.  That would fill him up with so much light.  The princess was frightened with fear.  Roscuro would fill up the darkness.  He would fill Gregory with as much light as possible which would bring light to everybody (happiness)."  --Kelli
 
 
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8350 Hillrose St., Sunland, CA 91040
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